🎵 שירי אהבה
love with no doubt
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כתבתי את השיר בגדנ"ע של בית ספר ואפילו שהוא באנגלית ואין כח לקרוא כדאי לכם!!!אה וסליחה אם יש טיפטיפה שגיאות
sometimes it feels like love
and sometimes just like a feeling above
maby i'm just too shy
or perhaps i'm leaving in a lie
when i feel i want to cry
theres a part that doesn't let me-my eye
than it happend something new
like a feeling that inside me grew
i saw this new amazing boy
he really looked like a baby toy
i couldn't breath i had no air
i wanted to look at him but i didn't dair
and than it happend unexpected thing
my boy looked at me and i felt in a dream
all my world was colord pink
i was comfused i didn't think
i wanted him so very much
even just to feel his worm touch
my body shaked even my heart
i felt for a second very smart
now it feels good that we are two
that i'm hugged only by you
my heart moves in and out
now its love without no doubt!!!!!!!!
sometimes it feels like love
and sometimes just like a feeling above
maby i'm just too shy
or perhaps i'm leaving in a lie
when i feel i want to cry
theres a part that doesn't let me-my eye
than it happend something new
like a feeling that inside me grew
i saw this new amazing boy
he really looked like a baby toy
i couldn't breath i had no air
i wanted to look at him but i didn't dair
and than it happend unexpected thing
my boy looked at me and i felt in a dream
all my world was colord pink
i was comfused i didn't think
i wanted him so very much
even just to feel his worm touch
my body shaked even my heart
i felt for a second very smart
now it feels good that we are two
that i'm hugged only by you
my heart moves in and out
now its love without no doubt!!!!!!!!





💬 תגובות (4)
זה פשוט מדהים!!!!!!!!!!!!
ועוד כתבת את זה לבד זה יפה כל כך..והחרוזים..זה מושלם את באמת מוכשרת תכתבי לנו עוד שירים מהממים ובהצלחה עם האהבה שלך!!!
ימית
שאת פשוט...
מ-ו-כ-ש-ר-ת בטירוף!!!!
אין שום טעות, וגם אם יש...בקטנה!!!
את ממש גרמת לי לבכות...
תמשיכי לכתוב שירים,
(גם אם בדרך כלל את לא כותבת וזה רק בגדנ"ע)...
פשוט חבל לבזבז כישרון כזה!!!
אני מקווה שהאהבה שלכם תימשך לנצח...
מאחלת לך רק רק רק רק טוב בלי אכזבות...מכל הלב!!!
שלך, עדי!
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