ישלי המוןןןן המוןןן טעויות ואני חייבת שתעזרו לי לתקן אותן,
בבקשהה =[
I preferred in the subject holocaust because my teacher said us to do about that.
Later I preferred in Simon Wiesenthal (כ..) personality from the holocaust.
I selected specifically in Simon Wiesenthal because of the fact that he doesn’t a known personality, and because that we will can to discover about him some new and others factors.
When I selected in Simon Wiesenthal I don’t know about him nothing a part from he personality distinguished and important person.
He was do important action that need respect toward
I expect to learn why dose he important personality?
How was he surviving in the holocaust?
And what he did for the Jewish people?
אם אנגלית היה הצד החזק שלי בשמחה הייתי עוזרת לך
חיחיחי 😊 😊
לא כלכך הבנתי מה זה?
למה בחרת בנושא הזה?
אם כן, למה כתבת העדפתי ולא בחרתי?
וחוצמזה תשני את הקטע שהעדפת לעשות על זה כי המורה אמרה ותבחרי סיבה אחרת...
את יכולה לכתוב שלדעתך זה נושא חשוב ללמוד עליו, על מה שהעם שלך עבר וכו'...
וגם יש לך כמה בעיות בדקדוק במשפטים..
QUOTE (LooVee @ 08/03/2008) ישלי המוןןןן המוןןן טעויות ואני חייבת שתעזרו לי לתקן אותן,
בבקשהה =[
I preferred in the subject holocaust because my teacher said us to do about that.
Later I preferred in Simon Wiesenthal (כ..) personality from the holocaust.
I selected specifically in Simon Wiesenthal because of the fact that he doesn’t a known personality, and because that we will can to discover about him some new and others factors.
When I selected in Simon Wiesenthal I don’t know about him nothing a part from he personality distinguished and important person.
He was do important action that need respect toward
I expect to learn why dose he important personality?
How was he surviving in the holocaust?
And what he did for the Jewish people?
I picked the subject of the Holocaust because that was what the teacher told us to research about . (למה שתגידי דבר כזה בכלל? חח )
Later I picked Simon Wiesenthal as a personality from the Holocaust.
I selected him becuase he is not a known personality, so we can discover new things about him.
when I chose Simon Wiesenthal, I didn't know much about him, except that he was an important and distinguished person.
I know he has done many things that earned him a lot of respect.
I expect to learn why Simon Wiesenthal is an important personality, how he survived the Holocaust and what he did for the Jewish people.
טוב זה בערך מה שהצלחתי לעשות פה..
המשפט הראשון ממש חלש בתור התחלה
אולי תגידי מה החשיבות של השואה ואז תעברי לבחירה שלך.
וד"א נכון שבעברית אומרת "בחרתי ב.."
באנגלית לא אומרים את ה"ב.." אומרים רק בחרתי ___
i picked Simon Wiesenthal
בלי "in"
